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@@ -67,9 +67,9 @@ Status: Draft
In order to prevent bogus data from corrupting the tally, the Tor
relays and the Tally Reporters perform multiple "instances" of this
- algorithm, randomly sampling in each relays. The relay sends multiple
- Y values for each measurement, built with different sets of B_i.
- These "instances" are numbered in order from 1 to R.
+ algorithm, randomly sampling the relays in each instance. Each relay
+ sends multiple Y values for each measurement, built with different
+ sets of B_i. These "instances" are numbered in order from 1 to R.
So that the system will still produce results in the event of a single
Tally Reporter failure, these instances are distributed across multiple
@@ -108,9 +108,9 @@ Status: Draft
noise.)
We also need to work out how to handle instances with mixed
- Tor versions, where some Data Collectors report different
- counters to other Data Collectors. (The blinding works if we
- substitute zeroes for missing counters on Tally Reporters.
+ Tor versions, where some Data Collectors report a different
+ set of counters than other Data Collectors. (The blinding works
+ if we substitute zeroes for missing counters on Tally Reporters.
But we also need to add noise in this case.)
-teor