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authorRoger Dingledine <arma@torproject.org>2021-09-29 05:21:39 -0400
committerRoger Dingledine <arma@torproject.org>2021-09-29 05:21:39 -0400
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simple grammar issues in prop321
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@@ -19,7 +19,7 @@ we can de-duplicate families which sometimes helps.) Adding or
removing a server from the family requires all the other servers to
change their torrc settings.
-The is growth in size is not just a theoretical problem. Family
+This growth in size is not just a theoretical problem. Family
declarations currently make up a little over 55% of the
microdescriptors in the directory--around 24% after compression.
The largest family has around 270 members. With Walking Onions, 270
@@ -34,7 +34,7 @@ requirements and providing a more detailed migration plan.
In this design, every family has a master ed25519 "family key". A node
is in the family iff its server descriptor includes a certificate of its
ed25519 identity key with the family key. The certificate
-format the one in the tor-certs.txt spec; we would allocate a new
+format is the one in the tor-certs.txt spec; we would allocate a new
certificate type for this usage. These certificates would need to
include the signing key in the appropriate extension.
@@ -93,7 +93,7 @@ need to do in this event would be to move to a new private family
key.
A more orthodox method would be to keep the private key somewhere
-offline, and using it to generate a certificate for each relay in
+offline, and use it to generate a certificate for each relay in
the family as needed. These certificates should be made with
long-enough lifetimes, and relays should warn when they are going to
expire soon.
@@ -186,8 +186,8 @@ microdescriptors' family lines:
digest of the microdescriptor listed in the original votes. (This
calculation is deterministic.)
-The problem with this approach is that authorities would have to s
-to fetch microdescriptors they do not have in order to replace their
+The problem with this approach is that authorities would have to
+fetch microdescriptors they do not have in order to replace their
family lines. Currently, voting never requires an authority to
fetch a microdescriptor from another authority. If we implement
vote compression and diffs as in the Walking Onions proposal,