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authorNick Mathewson <nickm@torproject.org>2012-10-11 10:31:49 -0400
committerNick Mathewson <nickm@torproject.org>2012-10-11 10:31:49 -0400
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edits to proposals 206..208
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@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ Target: 0.2.4.x
1. Obligatory Motivation Section
- Insert motivations for IPv6 here. Mention IPv4 address exhaustion.
+ [Insert motivations for IPv6 here. Mention IPv4 address exhaustion.
Insert official timeline for official IPv6 adoption here.
@@ -17,11 +17,11 @@ Target: 0.2.4.x
Insert profession of firm conviction that eventually there will be
something somebody wants to connect to which requires the ability to
- connect to an IPv6 address.
+ connect to an IPv6 address.]
2. Proposal
- Proposal 117 has been there since coderman wrote it 2007, and it's
+ Proposal 117 has been there since coderman wrote it in 2007, and it's
still mostly right. Rather than replicate it in full, I'll describe
this proposal as a patch to it.
@@ -31,7 +31,7 @@ Target: 0.2.4.x
been moving with IPv4 addresses) to summaries of which IPv6 ports
are generally permitted. So let's allow server descriptors to include
a list of accepted IPv6 ports, using the same format as the "p" line
- in microdecsriptors, using the "ipv6-policy" keyword.
+ in microdescriptors, using the "ipv6-policy" keyword.
"ipv6-policy" SP ("accept" / "reject") SP PortList NL
@@ -43,7 +43,7 @@ Target: 0.2.4.x
"p6" line in microdescriptors.
- This change breaks the existing exit enclave idea for IPv6; but the
+ This change breaks the existing exit enclave idea for IPv6, but the
exiting exit enclave implementation never worked right in the first
place. If we can come up with a good way to support it, we can add
that back in.
@@ -118,7 +118,7 @@ Target: 0.2.4.x
- IPv6 addresses are plentiful, which makes cacheing them dangerous
+ IPv6 addresses are plentiful, which makes caching them dangerous
if you're hoping to avoid tracking over time. (With IPv4 addresses,
it's harder to give every user a different IPv4 address for a target
hostname with a long TTL, and then accept connections to those IPv4