Minor edits to changelog

1 files changed, 17 insertions, 18 deletions

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@@ -19,6 +19,8 @@ Changes in version 0.3.5.4-alpha - 2018-11-07
   o Minor features (continuous integration):
     - Add a Travis CI build for --enable-nss on Linux gcc. Closes
       ticket 27751.
+    - Add new CI job to Travis configuration to runs stem-based
+      integration tests. Closes ticket 27913.
 
   o Minor features (Windows, continuous integration):
     - Build tor on Windows Server 2012 R2 and Windows Server 2016 using
@@ -33,36 +35,37 @@ Changes in version 0.3.5.4-alpha - 2018-11-07
     - Fix a pair of missing headers on OpenBSD. Fixes bug 28303; bugfix
       on 0.3.5.1-alpha. Patch from Kris Katterjohn.
 
-  o Minor bugfixes (compilation, opensolaris):
+  o Minor bugfixes (compilation, OpenSolaris):
     - Add a missing include to compat_pthreads.c, to fix compilation on
       OpenSolaris and its descendants. Fixes bug 27963; bugfix
       on 0.3.5.1-alpha.
 
   o Minor bugfixes (configuration):
-    - Resume refusing to start with relative file paths and RunAsDaemon
-      set (regression from the fix for bug 22731). Fixes bug 28298;
-      bugfix on 0.3.3.1-alpha.
+    - Refuse to start with relative file paths and RunAsDaemon set
+      (regression from the fix for bug 22731). Fixes bug 28298; bugfix
+      on 0.3.3.1-alpha.
 
   o Minor bugfixes (directory authority, also in 0.3.4.9):
     - Log additional info when we get a relay that shares an ed25519 ID
       with a different relay, instead making a BUG() warning. Fixes bug
       27800; bugfix on 0.3.2.1-alpha.
 
-  o Minor bugfixes (hidden service v3):
-    - Build the service descriptor signing key certificate before
-      uploading so we always have a fresh one leaving no chances for it
-      to expire service side. Fixes bug 27838; bugfix on 0.3.2.1-alpha.
+  o Minor bugfixes (onion service v3):
+    - Build the service descriptor's signing key certificate before
+      uploading, so we always have a fresh one: leaving no chances for
+      it to expire service side. Fixes bug 27838; bugfix
+      on 0.3.2.1-alpha.
 
-  o Minor bugfixes (hidden service v3, client authorization):
+  o Minor bugfixes (onion service v3, client authorization):
     - Fix an assert() when adding a client authorization for the first
       time and then sending a HUP signal to the service. Before that,
-      tor would stop abruptly. Fixes bug 27995; bugfix on 0.3.5.1-alpha.
+      Tor would stop abruptly. Fixes bug 27995; bugfix on 0.3.5.1-alpha.
 
   o Minor bugfixes (onion services):
     - Unless we have explicitly set HiddenServiceVersion, detect the
       onion service version and then look for invalid options.
       Previously, we did the reverse, but that broke existing configs
-      which were pointed to a v2 hidden service and had options like
+      which were pointed to a v2 service and had options like
       HiddenServiceAuthorizeClient set Fixes bug 28127; bugfix on
       0.3.5.1-alpha. Patch by Neel Chauhan.
 
@@ -72,7 +75,7 @@ Changes in version 0.3.5.4-alpha - 2018-11-07
       on 0.3.5.1-alpha.
 
   o Minor bugfixes (protover, rust):
-    - Reject extra commas in version string. Fixes bug 27197; bugfix
+    - Reject extra commas in version strings. Fixes bug 27197; bugfix
       on 0.3.3.3-alpha.
 
   o Minor bugfixes (relay shutdown, systemd):
@@ -104,13 +107,9 @@ Changes in version 0.3.5.4-alpha - 2018-11-07
       (FreeBSD failures have been treated as expected since 18204 in
       0.2.8.) Fixes bug 27948; bugfix on 0.2.5.2-alpha.
 
-  o Testing:
-    - Add new CI job to Travis configuration that runs stem-based
-      integration tests. Closes ticket 27913.
-
-  o Documentation (hidden service manpage):
+  o Documentation (onion service manpage):
     - Improve HSv3 client authorization by making some options more
-      explicit and detailed. Closes ticket 28026. Patch by "mtigas".
+      explicit and detailed. Closes ticket 28026. Patch by Mike Tigas.
 
 
 Changes in version 0.3.4.9 - 2018-11-02