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@@ -11,35 +11,36 @@ Changes in version 0.4.5.4-rc - 2021-01-22
 
   o Major bugfixes (directory cache, performance, windows):
     - Limit the number of items in the consensus diff cache to 64 on
-      Windows. We hope this will help resolve an issue where Windows
-      relay operators reported Tor using 100% CPU, while we investigate
-      better solutions. Fixes bug 24857; bugfix on 0.3.1.1-alpha.
+      Windows. We hope this will mitigate an issue where Windows relay
+      operators reported Tor using 100% CPU, while we investigate better
+      solutions. Fixes bug 24857; bugfix on 0.3.1.1-alpha.
 
   o Minor feature (build system):
-    - New "make lsp" command to auto generate the compile_commands.json
-      file used by the ccls server. The "bear" program is needed for
+    - New "make lsp" command to generate the compile_commands.json file
+      used by the ccls language server. The "bear" program is needed for
       this. Closes ticket 40227.
 
   o Minor features (authority, logging):
-    - Give more visibility to directory authority operators during the
-      consensus voting process and while processing relay descriptors.
+    - Log more information for directory authority operators during the
+      consensus voting process, and while processing relay descriptors.
       Closes ticket 40245.
-    - Reject obsolete router/extrainfo descs earlier and more quietly,
-      Fixes bug 40238; bugfix on 0.4.5.1-alpha.
+    - Reject obsolete router/extrainfo descriptors earlier and more
+      quietly, to avoid spamming the logs. Fixes bug 40238; bugfix
+      on 0.4.5.1-alpha.
 
   o Minor bugfixes (compilation):
     - Fix another warning about unreachable fallthrough annotations when
       building with "--enable-all-bugs-are-fatal" on some compilers.
       Fixes bug 40241; bugfix on 0.4.5.3-rc.
-    - Change our search library configure macro linker flag order so it
-      works for certain compilers that need the libraries to be listed
-      in the right order. Fixes bug 33624; bugfix on 0.1.1.0-alpha.
+    - Change the linker flag ordering in our library search code so that
+      it works for compilers that need the libraries to be listed in the
+      right order. Fixes bug 33624; bugfix on 0.1.1.0-alpha.
 
   o Minor bugfixes (config, bridge):
-    - Don't initiate a connection to a bridge without a corresponding
-      transport. This also reverts an earlier fix we did for this that
-      would validate configuration to avoid such situations, which
-      doesn't work well with DisableNetwork. Fixes bug 40106; bugfix
+    - Don't initiate a connection to a bridge configured to use a
+      missing transport. This change reverts an earlier fix that would
+      try to avoid such situations during configuration chcecking, but
+      which doesn't work with DisableNetwork. Fixes bug 40106; bugfix
       on 0.4.5.1-alpha.
 
   o Minor bugfixes (onion services):
@@ -48,9 +49,9 @@ Changes in version 0.4.5.4-rc - 2021-01-22
       bugfix on 0.3.0.3-alpha.
 
   o Minor bugfixes (relay):
-    - If we were unable to build our descriptor, don't mark that we've
-      advertised our descriptor. Also remove an harmless BUG(). Fixes
-      bug 40231; bugfix on 0.4.5.1-alpha.
+    - If we were unable to build our descriptor, don't mark it as having
+      been advertised. Also remove an harmless BUG(). Fixes bug 40231;
+      bugfix on 0.4.5.1-alpha.
 
 
 Changes in version 0.4.5.3-rc - 2021-01-12