Merge pull request #1226 from comradekingu/patch-15

Changed "Snap", "as", "and", in source doc

1 files changed, 9 insertions, 9 deletions

diff --git a/docs/source/install.rst b/docs/source/install.rst
index adcc8efd..595a6aa6 100644
--- a/docs/source/install.rst
+++ b/docs/source/install.rst
@@ -11,16 +11,16 @@ You can download OnionShare for Windows and macOS from the `OnionShare website <
 Install in Linux
 ----------------
 
-There are various ways to install OnionShare for Linux, but the recommended way is to use either the `Flatpak <https://flatpak.org/>`_ or the `Snapcraft <https://snapcraft.io/>`_ package.
-Flatpak and Snapcraft ensure that you'll always use the newest version and run OnionShare inside of a sandbox.
+There are various ways to install OnionShare for Linux, but the recommended way is to use either the `Flatpak <https://flatpak.org/>`_ or the `Snap <https://snapcraft.io/>`_ package.
+Flatpak and Snap ensure that you'll always use the newest version and run OnionShare inside of a sandbox.
 
-Snapcraft is built-in to Ubuntu and Flatpak is built-in to Fedora, but which you use is up to you. Both work in all Linux distributions.
+Snap support is built-in to Ubuntu and Fedora comes with Flatpak support, but which you use is up to you. Both work in all Linux distributions.
 
 **Install OnionShare using Flatpak**: https://flathub.org/apps/details/org.onionshare.OnionShare
 
-**Install OnionShare using Snapcraft**: https://snapcraft.io/onionshare
+**Install OnionShare using Snap**: https://snapcraft.io/onionshare
 
-You can also download and install a PGP-signed ``.flatpak`` or ``.snap`` packages from https://onionshare.org/dist/ if you prefer.
+You can also download and install PGP-signed ``.flatpak`` or ``.snap`` packages from https://onionshare.org/dist/ if you prefer.
 
 .. _verifying_sigs:
 
@@ -40,13 +40,13 @@ You must have GnuPG installed to verify signatures. For macOS you probably want
 Signatures
 ^^^^^^^^^^
 
-You can find the signatures (``.asc`` files), as well as Windows, macOS, Flatpak, Snapcraft, and source packages, at https://onionshare.org/dist/ in the folders named for each version of OnionShare.
+You can find the signatures (as ``.asc`` files), as well as Windows, macOS, Flatpak, Snap, and source packages, at https://onionshare.org/dist/ in the folders named for each version of OnionShare.
 You can also find them on the `GitHub Releases page <https://github.com/micahflee/onionshare/releases>`_.
 
 Verifying
 ^^^^^^^^^
 
-Once you have imported Micah's public key into your GnuPG keychain, downloaded the binary, and downloaded the ``.asc`` signature, you can verify the binary for macOS in a terminal like this::
+Once you have imported Micah's public key into your GnuPG keychain, downloaded the binary and and ``.asc`` signature, you can verify the binary for macOS in a terminal like this::
 
     gpg --verify OnionShare-2.2.pkg.asc OnionShare-2.2.pkg
 
@@ -66,6 +66,6 @@ The expected output looks like this::
     gpg:          There is no indication that the signature belongs to the owner.
     Primary key fingerprint: 927F 419D 7EC8 2C2F 149C  1BD1 403C 2657 CD99 4F73
 
-If you don't see 'Good signature from', there might be a problem with the integrity of the file (malicious or otherwise), and you should not install the package. (The WARNING shown above, is not a problem with the package: it only means you haven't already defined any level of 'trust' of Micah's PGP key.)
+If you don't see 'Good signature from', there might be a problem with the integrity of the file (malicious or otherwise), and you should not install the package. (The "WARNING:" shown above, is not a problem with the package, it only means you haven't already defined any level of 'trust' of Micah's PGP key.)
 
-If you want to learn more about verifying PGP signatures, guides for `Qubes OS <https://www.qubes-os.org/security/verifying-signatures/>`_ and the `Tor Project <https://support.torproject.org/tbb/how-to-verify-signature/>`_ may be helpful.
+If you want to learn more about verifying PGP signatures, the guides for `Qubes OS <https://www.qubes-os.org/security/verifying-signatures/>`_ and the `Tor Project <https://support.torproject.org/tbb/how-to-verify-signature/>`_ may be useful.