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diff --git a/doc/design-paper/blocking.tex b/doc/design-paper/blocking.tex index eb8cfc653a..835d090522 100644 --- a/doc/design-paper/blocking.tex +++ b/doc/design-paper/blocking.tex @@ -131,7 +131,7 @@ whistleblowers in firewalled corporate networks; and for people in unanticipated oppressive situations. In fact, by designing with a variety of adversaries in mind, we can take advantage of the fact that adversaries will be in different stages of the arms race at each location, -so a server blocked in one locale can still be useful in others. +so an address blocked in one locale can still be useful in others. We assume that the attackers' goals are somewhat complex. \begin{tightlist} @@ -149,9 +149,9 @@ We assume that the attackers' goals are somewhat complex. \item Complete blocking (where nobody at all can ever download censored content) is not a goal. Attackers typically recognize that perfect censorship is not only - impossible, but unnecessary: if ``undesirable'' information is known only + impossible, it is unnecessary: if ``undesirable'' information is known only to a small few, further censoring efforts can be focused elsewhere. -\item Similarly, the censors are not attempting to shut down or block {\it +\item Similarly, the censors do not attempt to shut down or block {\it every} anti-censorship tool---merely the tools that are popular and effective (because these tools impede the censors' information restriction goals) and those tools that are highly visible (thus making the censors @@ -1667,8 +1667,8 @@ Many people working on this field want to publicize the existence and extent of censorship concurrently with the deployment of their circumvention software. The easy reason for this two-pronged push is to attract volunteers for running proxies in their systems; but in many -cases their main goal is not to focus on actually allowing individuals -to circumvent the firewall, but rather to educate the world about the +cases their main goal is not to focus on getting more users signed up, +but rather to educate the rest of the world about the censorship. The media also tries to do its part by broadcasting the existence of each new circumvention system. |