interim tweaks

svn:r9246

3 files changed, 9 insertions, 9 deletions

diff --git a/doc/dir-voting.txt b/doc/dir-voting.txt
index 908aa857a0..4909701853 100644
--- a/doc/dir-voting.txt
+++ b/doc/dir-voting.txt
@@ -78,7 +78,7 @@ $Id: /tor/branches/eventdns/doc/dir-spec.txt 9469 2006-11-01T23:56:30.179423Z ni
 
 2.1. Vote specifications
 
-  Votes in v2.1 are just like v2 network status documents.  We add these
+  Votes in v2.1 are similar to v2 network status documents.  We add these
   fields to the preamble:
 
      "vote-status" -- the word "vote".
diff --git a/doc/tor-spec-v2.txt b/doc/tor-spec-v2.txt
index 7fd4e5e82a..4eeadb9adc 100644
--- a/doc/tor-spec-v2.txt
+++ b/doc/tor-spec-v2.txt
@@ -5,13 +5,13 @@ $Id$
                               Roger Dingledine
                                Nick Mathewson
 
-Note: This document aims to specify Tor as implemented in 0.1.2.1-alpha-dev
+Note: This document aims to specify Tor as implemented in 0.2.1.0-alpha-dev
 and later.  Future versions of Tor will implement improved protocols, and
 compatibility is not guaranteed.
 
 THIS DOCUMENT IS UNSTABLE.  Right now, we're revising the protocol to remove
 a few long-standing limitations.  For the most stable current version of the
-protocol, see tor-spec-v0.txt; current versions of Tor are backward-compatible.
+protocol, see tor-spec.txt; current versions of Tor are backward-compatible.
 
 This specification is not a design document; most design criteria
 are not examined.  For more information on why Tor acts as it does,
@@ -271,7 +271,7 @@ TODO:
    VERSIONS cells are used to introduce parameters and characteristics of
    Tor clients and servers when connections are established.
 
-4, Connection management
+4. Connection management
 
    Upon establishing a TLS connection, both parties immediately begin
    negotiating a connection protocol version and other connection parameters.
@@ -298,18 +298,18 @@ TODO:
    a TLS connection has been established, the parties check whether the
    other side has an obsolete certificate (organizationName equal to "Tor"
    or "TOR").  If the other party presented an obsolete certificate,
-   we assume a v0 connection.  Otherwise, both parties send VERSIONS
+   we assume a v1 connection.  Otherwise, both parties send VERSIONS
    cells listing all their supported versions.  Upon receiving the
    other party's VERSIONS cell, the implementation begins using the
    highest-valued version common to both cells.  If the first cell from
-   the other party is _not_ a VERSIONS cell, we assume a v0 protocol.
+   the other party is _not_ a VERSIONS cell, we assume a v1 protocol.
 
    Implementations MUST discard cells that are not the first cells sent on a
    connection.
 
 4.2. MITM-prevention and time checking
 
-   If we negotiate a v1 connection or higher, the first cell we send SHOULD
+   If we negotiate a v2 connection or higher, the first cell we send SHOULD
    be a NETINFO cell.  Implementations SHOULD NOT send NETINFO cells at other
    times.
 
diff --git a/doc/tor.1.in b/doc/tor.1.in
index 32b9c63832..65cb8cade4 100644
--- a/doc/tor.1.in
+++ b/doc/tor.1.in
@@ -109,7 +109,7 @@ authority for old-style (v1) directories as well.  (Only directory mirrors
 care about this.)  Tor will use this server as an authority for hidden
 service information if the "hs" flag is set, or if the "v1" flag is set and
 the "no-hs" flag is \fBnot\fP set.  If a flag "orport=\fBport\fR" is given,
-Tor will consider use the given port to open encrypted tunnels to the
+Tor will use the given port when opening encrypted tunnels to the
 dirserver.
 If no \fBdirserver\fP line is given, Tor will use the default
 directory servers.  NOTE: this option is intended
@@ -964,7 +964,7 @@ A set of persistent key-value mappings.  These are documented in the file.  Thes
 .LP
 .TP
 .B \fIDataDirectory\fP/bw_accounting
-Used to track bandwidth accounting values (when the current period starts and ends; how much has been read and written so far this period).  Soon to be obsoleted by state.  Only used when bandwidth accounting is enabled.
+Used to track bandwidth accounting values (when the current period starts and ends; how much has been read and written so far this period).  This file is obsolete, and the data is now stored in the 'state' file as well.  Only used when bandwidth accounting is enabled.
 .LP
 .TP
 .B \fIDataDirectory\fP/control_auth_cookie