overhaul the docs for win32, os x, and switchproxy

svn:r4612

1 files changed, 18 insertions, 7 deletions

diff --git a/doc/tor-switchproxy.html b/doc/tor-switchproxy.html
index 8df86ab6ed..0a690bf1a1 100644
--- a/doc/tor-switchproxy.html
+++ b/doc/tor-switchproxy.html
@@ -26,7 +26,6 @@ SwitchProxy works anywhere Firefox works. Hopefully everybody else can
 follow along just fine.</p>
 
 <hr />
-
 <a name="zero"></a>
 <h3>Step Zero: Download and Install Tor and Privoxy</h3>
 
@@ -43,7 +42,6 @@ one</a> of OS X Tor installation howto, since our OS X package includes
 Privoxy and configures it already.</p>
 
 <hr />
-
 <a name="one"></a>
 <h3>Step One: Download and Install SwitchProxy</h3>
 
@@ -66,17 +64,19 @@ src="http://tor.eff.org/img/screenshot-switchproxy-plugin-starting.jpg" />
 <p>Once the installer is finished, it will tell you that SwitchProxy
 will be working once you restart Firefox:</p>
 
+<p>Once the installer is finished, you should close all of your FireFox
+windows and restart the program.</p>
+
 <img alt="firefox plugin finished"
 src="http://tor.eff.org/img/screenshot-switchproxy-plugin-finished.jpg" />
 
 <hr />
-
 <a name="two"></a>
 <h3>Step Two: Configure SwitchProxy</h3>
 
-<p>Now restart your Firefox. You'll notice there's a new toolbar
+<p>When you restart Firefox, you'll notice there's a new toolbar
 that lets you control your proxies. Now we're going to set up a proxy
-configuration for Privoxy. Click on "add":</p>
+configuration for Tor. Click on "add" in the new Proxy toolbar:</p>
 
 <img alt="new toolbar"
 src="http://tor.eff.org/img/screenshot-switchproxy-toolbar.jpg" />
@@ -104,8 +104,7 @@ Click on the pull-down list and select tor, as shown here:</p>
 <img alt="switch to tor"
 src="http://tor.eff.org/img/screenshot-switchproxy-switch.jpg" />
 
-<p>Almost done. It may look like you're using Tor now, but you need to
-click "Apply" to make your change take effect:</p>
+<p>Almost done. Click "Apply" to make your change take effect:</p>
 
 <img alt="apply"
 src="http://tor.eff.org/img/screenshot-switchproxy-apply.jpg" />
@@ -119,6 +118,18 @@ to get a German exit node</a>:</p>
 src="http://tor.eff.org/img/screenshot-switchproxy-german.jpg" />
 
 <hr />
+<a name="two"></a>
+<h3>Step Three: Check if it works</h3>
+
+<p>In the above example, it was clear that it worked because the web
+page showed up in a different language. To be more certain, though,
+you'll want to verify that your Tor is working. Do
+<a href="http://tor.eff.org/doc/tor-doc-win32.html#verify">step four</a>
+of the Windows Tor installation howto, or
+<a href="http://tor.eff.org/doc/tor-doc-osx.html#verify">step three</a>
+of the OS X Tor installation howto.</p>
+
+<hr />
 
 <p>If you have suggestions for improving this document, please <a
 href="mailto:tor-bugs@freehaven.net">send them to us</a>. Thanks!</p>