polish r9726-r9903

svn:r10182

1 files changed, 5 insertions, 5 deletions

diff --git a/doc/design-paper/blocking.tex b/doc/design-paper/blocking.tex
index eb8cfc653a..835d090522 100644
--- a/doc/design-paper/blocking.tex
+++ b/doc/design-paper/blocking.tex
@@ -131,7 +131,7 @@ whistleblowers in firewalled corporate networks; and for people in
 unanticipated oppressive situations. In fact, by designing with
 a variety of adversaries in mind, we can take advantage of the fact that
 adversaries will be in different stages of the arms race at each location,
-so a server blocked in one locale can still be useful in others.
+so an address blocked in one locale can still be useful in others.
 
 We assume that the attackers' goals are somewhat complex.
 \begin{tightlist}
@@ -149,9 +149,9 @@ We assume that the attackers' goals are somewhat complex.
 \item Complete blocking (where nobody at all can ever download censored
   content) is not a
   goal. Attackers typically recognize that perfect censorship is not only
-  impossible, but unnecessary: if ``undesirable'' information is known only
+  impossible, it is unnecessary: if ``undesirable'' information is known only
   to a small few, further censoring efforts can be focused elsewhere.
-\item Similarly, the censors are not attempting to shut down or block {\it
+\item Similarly, the censors do not attempt to shut down or block {\it
   every} anti-censorship tool---merely the tools that are popular and
   effective (because these tools impede the censors' information restriction
   goals) and those tools that are highly visible (thus making the censors
@@ -1667,8 +1667,8 @@ Many people working on this field want to publicize the existence
 and extent of censorship concurrently with the deployment of their
 circumvention software. The easy reason for this two-pronged push is
 to attract volunteers for running proxies in their systems; but in many
-cases their main goal is not to focus on actually allowing individuals
-to circumvent the firewall, but rather to educate the world about the
+cases their main goal is not to focus on getting more users signed up,
+but rather to educate the rest of the world about the
 censorship. The media also tries to do its part by broadcasting the
 existence of each new circumvention system.