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-Changes in version 0.3.3.1-alpha - 2018-01-??:
-  Blurb goes here
-
-  o Major features (onion services, security):
-    - Provide torrc options to pin the second and third hops of onion
-      service circuits to a list of nodes. The option HSLayer2Guards
-      pins the second hop, and the option HSLayer3Guards pins the third
-      hop. Closes ticket 13837.
+Changes in version 0.3.3.1-alpha - 2018-01-25:
+  Tor 0.3.3.1-alpha is the first release
 
   o Major features (embedding):
     - There is now a documented stable API for programs that need to
@@ -14,35 +8,39 @@ Changes in version 0.3.3.1-alpha - 2018-01-??:
     - Tor now has support for restarting in the same process.
       Controllers that run Tor using the "tor_api.h" interface can now
       restart Tor after Tor has exited. This support is incomplete,
-      however: we have fixed the crash bugs that prevented it from
-      working at all before, but many bugs probably remain, including
-      the possibility of security issues. Implements ticket 24581.
+      however: we fixed crash bugs that prevented it from working at
+      all, but many bugs probably remain, including a possibility of
+      security issues. Implements ticket 24581.
 
   o Major features (IPv6, directory documents):
     - Add consensus method 27, which adds IPv6 ORPorts to the microdesc
-      consensus. This makes it easier for IPv6 clients to bootstrap and
-      choose reachable entry guards. Implements 23826.
+      consensus. This information it easier for IPv6 clients to
+      bootstrap and choose reachable entry guards. Implements 23826.
     - Add consensus method 28, which removes IPv6 ORPorts from
-      microdescriptors. Now that there are IPv6 ORPorts in the microdesc
-      consensus, they are redundant in microdescs. This change is
-      compatible with tor clients on 0.2.8.x and later. (That is to say,
-      with all Tor clients having IPv6 bootstrap and guard support.)
+      microdescriptors. Now that there are the consensus contains IPv6
+      ORPorts, they are redundant in microdescs. This change will be
+      used by tor clients on 0.2.8.x and later. (That is to say, with
+      all Tor clients having IPv6 bootstrap and guard support.)
       Implements 23828.
     - Expand the documentation for AuthDirHasIPv6Connectivity when it is
       set by different numbers of authorities. Fixes 23870
       on 0.2.4.1-alpha.
 
   o Major features (onion service v3, control port):
-    - Control port now supports command and events for v3 onion
-      services. See proposal 284 for more information on what has been
-      done exactly. Only the HSFETCH command hasn't been implemented at
-      this stage because of a lack of use case with v3.
-
-      It is now possible to create ephemeral v3 services using the
-      ADD_ONION command. Additionally, several events (HS_DESC,
-      HS_DESC_CONTENT, CIRC and CIRC_MINOR) and commands (GETINFO,
-      HSPOST, ADD_ONION and DEL_ONION) have been extended to support v3
-      onion services. Closes ticket 20699.
+    - The control port now supports command and events for v3 onion
+      services: It is now possible to create ephemeral v3 services using
+      ADD_ONION. Additionally, several events (HS_DESC, HS_DESC_CONTENT,
+      CIRC and CIRC_MINOR) and commands (GETINFO, HSPOST, ADD_ONION and
+      DEL_ONION) have been extended to support v3 onion services. Closes
+      ticket 20699; implements proposal 284.
+
+  o Major features (onion services):
+    - Provide torrc options to pin the second and third hops of onion
+      service circuits to a list of nodes. The option HSLayer2Guards
+      pins the second hop, and the option HSLayer3Guards pins the third
+      hop. These options are for use in conjunction with experiments
+      with a "vanguards" for preventing guard enumeration attacks.
+      Closes ticket 13837.
 
   o Major features (rust, portability, experimental):
     - Tor now ships with an optional implementation of one of its
@@ -54,18 +52,18 @@ Changes in version 0.3.3.1-alpha - 2018-01-??:
       Implementation by Chelsea Komlo. Closes ticket 22840.
 
   o Major features (storage, configuration):
-    - Users can choose to store cached directory documents somewhere
-      other than the DataDirectory by using the CacheDirectory option.
-      Similarly, the storage location for relay's keys can be overridden
-      with the KeyDirectory option. Closes ticket 22703.
+    - Users can store cached directory documents somewhere other than
+      the DataDirectory by using the CacheDirectory option. Similarly,
+      the storage location for relay's keys can be overridden with the
+      KeyDirectory option. Closes ticket 22703.
 
   o Major features (v3 onion services, ipv6):
-    - When v3 onion service clients send introduce cells, include the
-      IPv6 address of the rendezvous point, if it has one. v3 onion
-      services running 0.3.2 ignore IPv6 addresses. In future Tor
-      versions, IPv6-only v3 single onion services can use IPv6
-      addresses to connect directly to the rendezvous point. Closes
-      ticket 23577. Patch by Neel Chauhan.
+    - When v3 onion service clients send introduce cells, they now
+      include the IPv6 address of the rendezvous point, if it has one.
+      Current v3 onion services running 0.3.2 ignore IPv6 addresses, but
+      in future Tor versions, IPv6-only v3 single onion services will be
+      able to IPv6 addresses to connect directly to the rendezvous
+      point. Closes ticket 23577. Patch by Neel Chauhan.
 
   o Major bugfixes (onion services, retry behavior):
     - Fix an "off by 2" error in counting rendezvous failures on the
@@ -99,11 +97,6 @@ Changes in version 0.3.3.1-alpha - 2018-01-??:
     - Tor now deletes the CookieAuthFile and ExtORPortCookieAuthFile
       when it stops. Closes ticket 23271.
 
-  o Minor features (code correctness, descriptors):
-    - Check that microdesc ed25519 ids are non-zero in
-      node_get_ed25519_id(), before returning them. Implements 24001,
-      patch by "aruna1234".
-
   o Minor features (defensive programming):
     - Most of the functions in Tor that free objects have been replaced
       with macros that free the objects and set the corresponding
@@ -111,6 +104,9 @@ Changes in version 0.3.3.1-alpha - 2018-01-??:
       dangling pointer bugs. Closes ticket 24337.
     - Where possible, the tor_free() macro now only evaluates its input
       once. Part of ticket 24337.
+    - Check that microdesc ed25519 ids are non-zero in
+      node_get_ed25519_id() before returning them. Implements 24001,
+      patch by "aruna1234".
 
   o Minor features (directory authority):
     - Make the "Exit" flag assignment only depend on whether the exit
@@ -128,14 +124,13 @@ Changes in version 0.3.3.1-alpha - 2018-01-??:
     - On most errors that would cause Tor to exit, it now tries to
       return from the tor_main() function, rather than calling the
       system exit() function. Most users won't notice a difference here,
-      but it should make a significant difference on platforms that try
-      to run Tor inside a separate thread: they should now be able to
-      survive Tor's exit conditions rather than having Tor shut down the
-      entire process. Closes ticket 23848.
+      but it should make a significant for programs that run Tor inside
+      a separate thread: they should now be able to survive Tor's exit
+      conditions rather than having Tor shut down the entire process.
+      Closes ticket 23848.
     - Applications that want to embed Tor can now tell Tor not to
       register any of its own POSIX signal handlers, using the
-      __DisableSignalHandlers option. This option is not meant for
-      general use. Closes ticket 24588.
+      __DisableSignalHandlers option. Closes ticket 24588.
 
   o Minor features (fallback directory list):
     - Avoid selecting fallbacks that change their IP addresses too
@@ -172,6 +167,8 @@ Changes in version 0.3.3.1-alpha - 2018-01-??:
       entries. Ticket 24681 will maintain the current fallback weights
       by changing Tor's default fallback weight to 10. Implements
       ticket 24679.
+    - Stop logging excessive information about fallback netblocks.
+      Implements ticket 24791.
 
   o Minor features (forward-compatibility):
     - If a relay supports some link authentication protocol that we do
@@ -201,12 +198,6 @@ Changes in version 0.3.3.1-alpha - 2018-01-??:
     - Added support for the Android logging subsystem. Closes
       ticket 24362.
 
-  o Minor features (OSX, iOS, performance):
-    - Use the mach_approximate_time() function (when available) to
-      implement coarse monotonic time. Having a coarse time function
-      should avoid a large number of system calls, and improve
-      performance slightly, especially under load. Closes ticket 24427.
-
   o Minor features (performance):
     - Support predictive circuit building for onion service circuits
       with multiple layers of guards. Closes ticket 23101.
@@ -221,6 +212,12 @@ Changes in version 0.3.3.1-alpha - 2018-01-??:
       when timestamping cells and buffer chunks for OOM calculations.
       Implements ticket 24374.
 
+  o Minor features (performance, OSX, iOS):
+    - Use the mach_approximate_time() function (when available) to
+      implement coarse monotonic time. Having a coarse time function
+      should avoid a large number of system calls, and improve
+      performance slightly, especially under load. Closes ticket 24427.
+
   o Minor features (performance, windows):
     - Improve performance on Windows Vista and Windows 7 by adjusting
       TCP send window size according to the recommendation from
@@ -263,13 +260,6 @@ Changes in version 0.3.3.1-alpha - 2018-01-??:
       the TOR_RUST_DEPENDENCIES option set. Fixes bug 22768; bugfix
       on 0.3.1.7.
 
-  o Minor bugfixes (code correctness):
-    - Stop invoking undefined behavior by using tor_free() on an
-      unaligned pointer in get_interface_addresses_ioctl(). This pointer
-      alignment issue exists on x86_64 macOS, but is unlikely to exist
-      elsewhere. Fixes bug 24733; bugfix on 0.3.0.0-alpha-dev; not in
-      any released version of tor.
-
   o Minor bugfixes (directory authorities, IPv6):
     - When creating a routerstatus (vote) from a routerinfo (descriptor),
       set the IPv6 address to the unspecified IPv6 address, and
@@ -281,12 +271,10 @@ Changes in version 0.3.3.1-alpha - 2018-01-??:
       don't put it in /usr/bin.) Fixes bug 24708; bugfix
       on 0.2.8.1-alpha.
 
-  o Minor bugfixes (hibernation):
+  o Minor bugfixes (hibernation, bandwidth accounting, shutdown):
     - When hibernating, close connections normally and allow them to
       flush. Fixes bug 23571; bugfix on 0.2.4.7-alpha. Also fixes
       bug 7267.
-
-  o Minor bugfixes (hibernation, bandwidth accounting, shutdown):
     - Do not attempt to launch self-reachability tests when entering
       hibernation. Fixes a base of bug 12062; bugfix on 0.0.9pre5.
     - Resolve several bugs related to descriptor fetching on bridge
@@ -299,11 +287,11 @@ Changes in version 0.3.3.1-alpha - 2018-01-??:
       Fixes a case of bug 12062; bugfix on 0.0.9pre5.
 
   o Minor bugfixes (IPv6, bridges):
-    - Tor now always sets IPv6 preferences for bridges, even if there is
-      only router information or router status and warns about them.
-      Fixes bug 24573; bugfix on 0.2.8.2-alpha.
-    - Tor now sets IPv6 address in rs as well as it's set the one in ri.
-      Closes ticket 24572; bugfix on 0.2.4.5-alpha. Patch by "ffmancera".
+    - Tor now always sets IPv6 preferences for bridges. Fixes bug 24573;
+      bugfix on 0.2.8.2-alpha.
+    - Tor now sets IPv6 address in the routerstatus as well as in the
+      router descriptors when updating addresses for a bridge. Closes
+      ticket 24572; bugfix on 0.2.4.5-alpha. Patch by "ffmancera".
 
   o Minor bugfixes (linux seccomp2 sandbox):
     - When running with the sandbox enabled, reload configuration files
@@ -323,7 +311,12 @@ Changes in version 0.3.3.1-alpha - 2018-01-??:
       limit (which can happen sometimes on some versions of OSX). Fixes
       bug 21074; bugfix on 0.0.9pre5.
 
-  o Minor bugfixes (performance):
+  o Minor bugfixes (performance, fragile-hardening):
+    - Improve the performance of our consensus-diff application code
+      when Tor is built with the --enable-fragile-hardening option set.
+      Fixes bug 24826; bugfix on 0.3.1.1-alpha.
+
+  o Minor bugfixes (performance, timeouts):
     - Consider circuits for timeout as soon as they complete a hop. This
       is more accurate than applying the timeout in
       circuit_expire_building() because that function is only called
@@ -336,11 +329,6 @@ Changes in version 0.3.3.1-alpha - 2018-01-??:
       from all circuits at the point where they complete their third
       hop. Fixes bug 23100; bugfix on 0.2.2.2-alpha.
 
-  o Minor bugfixes (performance, fragile-hardening):
-    - Improve the performance of our consensus-diff application code
-      when Tor is built with the --enable-fragile-hardening option set.
-      Fixes bug 24826; bugfix on 0.3.1.1-alpha.
-
   o Minor bugfixes (testing):
     - Give out Exit flags in bootstrapping networks. Fixes bug 24137;
       bugfix on 0.2.3.1-alpha.
@@ -375,7 +363,7 @@ Changes in version 0.3.3.1-alpha - 2018-01-??:
 
   o Documentation:
     - Add documentation on how to build tor with Rust dependencies
-      without requiring being online. Closes ticket 22907; bugfix
+      without having to beonline. Closes ticket 22907; bugfix
       on 0.3.0.3-alpha.
     - Clarify the behavior of RelayBandwidth{Rate,Burst} with client
       traffic. Closes ticket 24318.
@@ -386,31 +374,24 @@ Changes in version 0.3.3.1-alpha - 2018-01-??:
       ticket 24526.
 
   o Code simplification and refactoring  (channels):
-    - Remove the incoming and outgoing channel queues. The reason to do
-      so was due to the fact that they were always empty meaning never
-      used but still looked at in our fast path. Bottom line, it was an
-      unused code path.
+    - Remove the incoming and outgoing channel queues: These were never
+      used, but still took up a step in our fast path.
     - The majority of the channel unit tests have been rewritten and the
       code coverage has now been raised to 83.6% for channel.c. Closes
       ticket 23709.
-    - We've simplify a lot the channel subsystem by removing those
-      queues but also by removing a lot of unused code or dead code
-      around it. Overall this is a cleanup removing more than 1500 lines
-      of code overall and adding very little except for unit test.
+    - Remove other dead code from the a lot the channel subsystem: All
+      together, this cleanup has removed more than 1500 lines of code
+      overall and adding very little except for unit test.
 
   o Code simplification and refactoring (circuit rendezvous):
-    - Split get rendezvous circuit on client side on two different
-      functions. One that returns only established circuits and another
+    - Split the client-size rendezvous circuit lookup into two
+      functions: one that returns only established circuits and another
       that returns all kinds of circuits. Closes ticket 23459.
 
   o Code simplification and refactoring (controller):
     - Make most of the variables in networkstatus_getinfo_by_purpose()
       const. Implements ticket 24489.
 
-  o Code simplification and refactoring (fallbacks):
-    - Stop logging excessive information about fallback netblocks.
-      Implements ticket 24791.
-
 
 Changes in version 0.3.2.9 - 2018-01-09
   Tor 0.3.2.9 is the first stable release in the 0.3.2 series.