attempted clarity improvements in changelog.

1 files changed, 11 insertions, 13 deletions

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@@ -8,15 +8,13 @@ Changes in version 0.2.8.5-rc - 2016-07-0?
     - Urras is no longer a directory authority. Closes ticket 19271.
 
   o Major bugfixes (heartbeat):
-    - Fix a regression that would crash Tor when heartbeats are
-      disabled. Fixes bug 19454; bugfix on tor-0.2.8.1-alpha. Reported
-      by "kubaku".
+    - Fix a regression that would crash Tor when the periodic
+      "heartbeat" log messages were disabled. Fixes bug 19454; bugfix on
+      tor-0.2.8.1-alpha. Reported by "kubaku".
 
   o Minor features (build):
     - Tor now again builds with the recent OpenSSL 1.1 development
       branch (tested against 1.1.0-pre6-dev). Closes ticket 19499.
-
-  o Minor bugfixes (build):
     - When building manual pages, set the timezone to "UTC", so that the
       output is reproducible. Fixes bug 19558; bugfix on 0.2.2.9-alpha.
       Patch from intrigeri.
@@ -34,16 +32,16 @@ Changes in version 0.2.8.5-rc - 2016-07-0?
       on 0.2.8.2-alpha.
 
   o Minor bugfixes (logging):
-    - Reduce excessive logging when directory servers can't be found.
-      Fixes bug 18849; bugfix on 0.2.8.3-alpha and 0.2.8.1-alpha. Patch
-      by teor.
+    - Reduce pointlessly verbose log messages when directory servers
+      can't be found. Fixes bug 18849; bugfix on 0.2.8.3-alpha and
+      0.2.8.1-alpha. Patch by teor.
     - When a fallback directory changes its fingerprint from the hard-
       coded fingerprint, log a less severe, more explanatory log
       message. Fixes bug 18812; bugfix on 0.2.8.1-alpha. Patch by teor.
 
-  o Minor bugfixes (sandboxing):
-    - Allow statistics to be written to disk when sandboxing is enabled.
-      Fixes bugs 19556 and 19957; bugfix on 0.2.5.1-alpha and
+  o Minor bugfixes (Linux seccomp2 sandboxing):
+    - Allow statistics to be written to disk when "Sandbox 1" is
+      enabled. Fixes bugs 19556 and 19957; bugfix on 0.2.5.1-alpha and
       0.2.6.1-alpha respectively.
 
   o Minor bugfixes (user interface):
@@ -58,8 +56,8 @@ Changes in version 0.2.8.5-rc - 2016-07-0?
       explains how to comment out unsuitable fallbacks in a way that's
       compatible with the stem fallback parser.
     - Update fallback whitelist and blacklist based on relay operator
-      emails. Blacklist unsuitable fallbacks. Resolves ticket 19071.
-      Patch by teor.
+      emails. Blacklist unsuitable (non-working, over-volatile)
+      fallbacks. Resolves ticket 19071. Patch by teor.
     - Update hard-coded fallback list to remove unsuitable fallbacks.
       Resolves ticket 19071. Patch by teor.